bismillah

Here comes the rhino
trampling through the city:
a clear crystal dino-
saur with no pity.
With a hideous demeanor,
it spreads its terror
no scope is keener
to either child or ring-bearer
An icy diamond
with a latticed desgin here.
When you hear the siren,
you'll have to sign here
patient no. 110 _____________________________
Try to see if u can find the meaning of the poem. Leave a comment thx. =)
saur with no pity.
With a hideous demeanor,
it spreads its terror
no scope is keener
to either child or ring-bearer
An icy diamond
with a latticed desgin here.
When you hear the siren,
you'll have to sign here
patient no. 110 _____________________________
Try to see if u can find the meaning of the poem. Leave a comment thx. =)

6 comments:
Hi. thanks for your comments on my blog today. I'm glad you liked the poems and the doll.
I really think you poetry is very clever. You have quite a talent.
Poetessxx
thx a lot poetess.
I planned on publishing, but I don't know if anyone will publish my stuff. I'll just try to get lucky I guess.
ekhosama is one of a kind poet ~_^
ek thanks for the comments on "Lancets and syringes"
they prick me often to test my blood sample, and regulate my blood count,
my platelet count plunged to just 12, the normal is 150-200
i could've bled inside.
Oh my god, 12. Whoa, you've been through a lot Gerald. I'm glad you are okay. I have never been in anything that serious before.
it was i think the most unpleasant feelings ever pal.
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